College Essays

I really like how personal my essays are. I believe that my personal connection with the essays is what makes them genuine and even stand out among the rest. In fact when I was writing them, I just couldn't stop. I went past the word count way too many times. I still need to revise them of course. I would really like it if one of the advisors would take a look at them and give me feedback. I would like to know what I need to expand upon and what should be taken out. However, the essays are due on November 1st and this is coming up very soon.